hello, I was wondering if you be interested in drawing some concept art for our game we are developing? It is a fps first person shoot game for the pc? Let me know my email is alum_ini@hotmail.com, my name is derrick
I don't know if you're planning on altering this at all, but the symbol being in front of the light looks like an easy fix. I think if you just had a small point of light coming from where the pupil would be on the eye, it wouldn't obstruct the symbol too bad and it would set the character in the background more than he currently is.
You may not want to mess around with it anymore though. I know you're a busy ninja.
Thanks for the good thoughts. I'll probably leave it as-is for now though. Actually I kind of liked the indistinct power-source, sort of coalescing outside of the eye, but now that two people have mentioned it as a problem I should think about that approach!
.. needs a skull though.
You may not want to mess around with it anymore though. I know you're a busy ninja.
Keep up the great work Mr.McEvoy.
Thanks and I will!